Monday, January 28, 2008

Blog 1: What The....

I wake up, everything is a blur. All I can think of is the hellish fires that surrounded me those many hours ago. As I look around I get a chill up my spine and quiver from the cold night touching my skin. I take two steps back and fall straight into a lagoon. I step out and climb into the jungle I see a small tunnel and decide to speculate. I clamber into the hole and two feet in I here a strident sound like a dying walrus that is dying of starvation. I jump back and hit another boy.
"Well that wasn't very pleasin was it." he tells me.
"No it wasn't. I'm Ricky," I tell him.
"Names Billy," he says "Well, seems to me were stranded on an island doesn't it."
"Yes it does."
He doesn' t seem to answer so I start to walk away.
"Wait a sec, would you." he says to me. He then starts to climb into the surrounding jungle and there is a huge clamor. He then came out of the jungle with a baby pig in hand.
"Well there we go then, dinner." he says to me as he shows me the pig squealing for life. "Little bugger put up quite a fight back there, even jumbled around my shirt." he added in vain of his kill.
He then devoured half of the little piggy right in front of me.
Remembering his manners, which by the way I really don't think they'd apply here, he says "You want some?"
"No thank you, Billy." I reply to him.
"Alright well bye then." he says and starts to walk away.
"Wait, why don't we hang out?" I ask him "You know, explore this decorous beautiful island."
"Alright then we shall trek off together."
We look around the coast for hours until we can see the sunrise.
"It's beautiful isn't it." I say
"Yeah it is. Well what do you suppose we do now?"
"I say we race."
"Your on buddy."
We make a line where we were and then walk down the beach. he getsa big lead on me and finishes ten seconds before I do.
"Whats wrong fatty can't catch up. Slowpoke."
"Well that is just rude and grating." I reply to the commen on my wieght and speed. "I have a real indignation on that comment buddy and if you think for one second that you can..."
Then we heard it.
"Well don't get all pallor come on."
We run towrd the sound and as we get closer we see a chubby boy pointing people to a terrace.
"Hello, I'm Piggy." he tells us "I dont mean to interpose but what are your names.
"I'm Billy and this here is my pal Ricky."
"Well go right in Ricky and Billy. Meetings about to start"

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hi Ernie,
In the sentence "I step out and climb into the jungle I see a small tunnel and decide to speculate" doesn't really make sense to me. You don't speculate something you speculate and idea.
"I here a strident sound like a dying walrus that is dying of starvation." in this sentence you use the word dying twice in a row, and you used the wrong here. You could have said I hear a strident noise that sounded like a walrus dying of starvation.
Decorous in the following sentence doesn't really fit. it is just all of the sudden thrown in. Can you tell what i mean that it doesn't fit. "Wait, why don't we hang out?" I ask him "You know, explore this decorous beautiful island."
I think you use granting wrong in the sentence "Well that is just rude and grating." I don't understand what you mean when you said "I have real indignation on that buddy"

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